--- a/tutorial.html	Mon Apr 20 18:10:28 2009 -0700
+++ b/tutorial.html	Mon Apr 20 21:40:32 2009 -0700
@@ -166,9 +166,8 @@
 said, the easiest way to understand how MapReduce works is just to
 play around with creating your own view.</p>
 
-<p>So, to get a better feel for how MapReduce works, you can use the
-text field below to try making your own view. Just press the tab key
-when you're done making changes to recompute the view.</p>
+<p>You can use the text field below to do just that. Just press the
+tab key when you're done making changes to recompute the view.</p>
 
 <textarea class="example-code try-code">
 function tryMyView() {